December 13, 2011
A Carefree dream
It ought to be Sunday,
or, a Monday, probably!Precisely, just another day,
unusual becoming usual.Still
earth alight on morning rings,
sleepless trees kissing winds,
nightly passage big on wings
to fly, elude, take distant lift,
for carked times are thing of past,
last night saw it last,
for eyes to wake will be far,
seeking dreams honeyed they are!but,
present times are wailing back,
theories of past echoing aback,
point is little in going back,
its just, dreams end, a drawback.tho’ the realm stays alike,
eyes now kindle in delight,
hidden flights to usual tale,
redes, mind off mundane,
for did ride a mind carefree,
in a dream maybe.
Image Credit: John Yato
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” in a dream may be… ”
awesome…
nice…excellent close to this…love these lines as they are like the bass beat to this…
present times are wailing back,
theories of past echoing aback,
point is little in going back,
its just, dreams end, a drawback.
“seeking dreams, honeyed they are!” indeed! beautiful pen! you have a new fan!!!
Kellie@BackyardPondershttp://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/13/in-the-silence-of-make-believe/
…sleepless trees kissing winds…nice.. dreamy mood you paint here
very subtle & sweet.
Lovely, light, dreamy, ethereal touches throughout this.
Beautiful! Carefree in a dream is good. My name will post as dixibear, but I am “Mary.” Sigh, I don’t know how to change this on this Disqus thing.
Lovely and dreamy!
Great read. I love the middle especially, very nicely written.
“carked” is an archaic Middle English word for worried, I gather.
“redes” — chiefly British dialect — can be advice, schemes or plans, apparently.
You made me work to add to my word horde…
Beautiful…I sang couple of lines in between…
Wonderful images and thoughts you provoke with this piece, really like the unusual becoming usual, nicely done!
a carefree mind always spells HAPPY!!!
nice work!
happy rally!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/discomfort/
great imagery
Vivid imagery. Had me reading until the end!
Erick Flores
Excellent and vivid write. Very enjoyable read!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/a-thousand-candles/
This does have a dreamlike quality about it. Thanks for your comments on my post.
Well done. The mind does wander carefree…
the tug of ordinary and possibility is presented so well in your words. its expression leaves the emotions in a pull, wonderful write! ~ Rose
very nice, put me in a dreamy state
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cool,
keep dreaming.
dreamy.. hehe. Nice work
Dreams make the waking hours worth living ;
Dreams make the waking hours worth living
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This was an enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing with us. Blessings, Terri
great imagery
very well expressed
what is redes?
you had voted for my post “My Child is Gay’. That’s what brought me here
I seek solace in the world of dreams….
Beautifully expressed.
nice post really.